Looking good, start really bringing up the quality of craftsmanship. Slow down with the knife. Add some 3D surprise elements maybe. Thats the difference in a 2 (not passing) and a 3. The backgrounds are NOT an afterthought, they are part of the scene. Anything else will come across as lazy, and I know youre not! Look at https://www.pinterest.com/pin/626070785717723443/
Be sure to create at least one or two progress piece during this series that shows process, experimentation, and revision. Also look at:https://campbellsartclass.weebly.com/lesson-2-ap-process-photos-how-to.html This is a requirement for the portfolio. Show lots of shots that didn't make the final. X out with a red pen and reasons why. Lots of writing ON the progress piece. Like this:https://hyperallergic.com/256109/see-the-contact-sheets-from-13-legendary-photo-shoots/. Even though this is a photo shoot it applies to unused art ideas too. This can be done on an app as well. For example, the piece you didn't use for this. Maybe a red x on it and explanation of why you revised (not time, of course) Art terms telling why this one was better or that one didn't make the cut.
You have posted these references so thats good but we need to see your conceptual thinking, how you got here. You won't have much space to write about it, it is conveyed visually.
Materials: colored paper, prisma colors, procreate Processes: lineart, print, cut out, glue, texture, edit Ideas: when bad things happened to me I would draw to escape. Cooler colors throughout represented more mature themes, but here it is twisted to be positive, its maturity, learning from past pain to grow
Looking good, start really bringing up the quality of craftsmanship. Slow down with the knife. Add some 3D surprise elements maybe. Thats the difference in a 2 (not passing) and a 3. The backgrounds are NOT an afterthought, they are part of the scene. Anything else will come across as lazy, and I know youre not! Look at https://www.pinterest.com/pin/626070785717723443/
ReplyDeleteBe sure to create at least one or two progress piece during this series that shows process, experimentation, and revision.
Also look at:https://campbellsartclass.weebly.com/lesson-2-ap-process-photos-how-to.html This is a requirement for the portfolio. Show lots of shots that didn't make the final. X out with a red pen and reasons why. Lots of writing ON the progress piece. Like this:https://hyperallergic.com/256109/see-the-contact-sheets-from-13-legendary-photo-shoots/. Even though this is a photo shoot it applies to unused art ideas too. This can be done on an app as well.
For example, the piece you didn't use for this. Maybe a red x on it and explanation of why you revised (not time, of course) Art terms telling why this one was better or that one didn't make the cut.
You have posted these references so thats good but we need to see your conceptual thinking, how you got here. You won't have much space to write about it, it is conveyed visually.
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