Looking good, start really bringing up the quality of craftsmanship. Slow down with the knife. Add some 3D surprise elements maybe. Thats the difference in a 2 (not passing) and a 3. The backgrounds are NOT an afterthought, they are part of the scene. Anything else will come across as lazy, and I know youre not! Look at https://www.pinterest.com/pin/626070785717723443/
Be sure to create at least one or two progress piece during this series that shows process, experimentation, and revision. Also look at:https://campbellsartclass.weebly.com/lesson-2-ap-process-photos-how-to.html This is a requirement for the portfolio. Show lots of shots that didn't make the final. X out with a red pen and reasons why. Lots of writing ON the progress piece. Like this:https://hyperallergic.com/256109/see-the-contact-sheets-from-13-legendary-photo-shoots/. Even though this is a photo shoot it applies to unused art ideas too. This can be done on an app as well. For example, the piece you didn't use for this. Maybe a red x on it and explanation of why you revised (not time, of course) Art terms telling why this one was better or that one didn't make the cut.
You have posted these references so thats good but we need to see your conceptual thinking, how you got here. You won't have much space to write about it, it is conveyed visually.
Materials: card stock, markers, prisma colors, procreate Processes: lineart, print, cut, color, tape Ideas: kids not understanding danger of weapons, school shootings, see on tv as a cool thing
Materials: procreate, prisma colors, markers, cardstock, cardboard, paint, tissue paper, copper paper, metal wire Processes: drew and printed from digital art, cut out and colored, taped together, made set, added to set with wire, set up light and take pic Ideas: fire in house in NH, brother and I were playing with leaves outside while mom was struggling to put it out, as children we didn’t understand the weight of the situation
Looking good, start really bringing up the quality of craftsmanship. Slow down with the knife. Add some 3D surprise elements maybe. Thats the difference in a 2 (not passing) and a 3. The backgrounds are NOT an afterthought, they are part of the scene. Anything else will come across as lazy, and I know youre not! Look at https://www.pinterest.com/pin/626070785717723443/
ReplyDeleteBe sure to create at least one or two progress piece during this series that shows process, experimentation, and revision.
Also look at:https://campbellsartclass.weebly.com/lesson-2-ap-process-photos-how-to.html This is a requirement for the portfolio. Show lots of shots that didn't make the final. X out with a red pen and reasons why. Lots of writing ON the progress piece. Like this:https://hyperallergic.com/256109/see-the-contact-sheets-from-13-legendary-photo-shoots/. Even though this is a photo shoot it applies to unused art ideas too. This can be done on an app as well.
For example, the piece you didn't use for this. Maybe a red x on it and explanation of why you revised (not time, of course) Art terms telling why this one was better or that one didn't make the cut.
You have posted these references so thats good but we need to see your conceptual thinking, how you got here. You won't have much space to write about it, it is conveyed visually.
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